Rain shelter feedback

I have just recieved feedback about my rain shelter project and the feeling that came through was that this is a work in progress and would need more work. the theory is in place to create a really interesting and dynamic structure that could really engage people with the falling rain. looking at it now i do agree with what my lecturers have said and i feel that a combination of this design and a number of the other designs that i created to get to this point could make something quite special. i may continue to devolop this design and see if i can intergrate it into my design for promenade park.